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Moonfeathers




If only we could
keep the wings we leave in bed
ev'ry single night.






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  • Kalima
    April 10, 2007
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    That was short but very cute.
    Stacey







  • silverscent gold member
    February 26, 2007

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    Amazing write. Forgive me but I'm speachless...not sure what to say apart from that was a very enjoyable haiku.
    You captured one moment; one thought perfectly.
    Thanks for sharing.


  • Blind-Ambition
    February 26, 2007

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    lovely

    Haiku's are much more difficult than they seem, but this one is cohearant and insistant and lovely. Amazing.
    ps I wrote a haiku once. It's on Emily's facebook wall, which should tell you something about it's quality.