Whats with the all the hate?
We don't need this crap
Why can't we all be strait?
Time we bridge the gap
Who cares what she said?
Who cares what he does?
Just chill instead
Just drop what was
We were all so tight
We were like family
Now all we do is fight
Is this how we wanna be?
Reminess of the long days
Laughin' at life's little cracks
We would all just sit and blaze
Never stabbin' eachother's backs
Never doin' nobody wrong
Life was sweet and fun
Livin' like a Sublime song
Thinkin' paradise couldn't be done
Playin' guitar all day
Rappin' all night
Goin' to Hometown buffet
Life not great but definitely alright
It's gone and done
Are you happy now?
We had our fun
Are you happy now?
Author notes
Just looking to a past summer which has long since escaped into many drama filled days
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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interesting
i like it it shows a lot of emotion and all . . . it is better to get along to fight obviously but sometimes people cant help them selves well keep the great work up
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Hmmm
I think every person has a remembrance like this. Drama seems to rule many lives anymore, sad but true. Wonderful write. I can relate as many others can also. HEY
WE HAVE A HOMETOWN BUFFET!!!
See you can come, and we have Golden Corral, which is the besht!
Great write Dave, I love your writings, almost as much as your texts


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WOW!
I think this is my favorite of all of your poems! It is so true! I absolutely loved it! It was so awesome! You showed so much talent in it! Keep it up, kid!
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"Reminess of the long days
Laughin' at life's little cracks
We would all just sit and blaze
Never stabbin' eachother's backs"
I love this part.
GAH! And this poem is very true.
Drama=
yuup.
♥

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