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My Mantra

Tears fall
Heart aches
Body shakes
Tears fall
    -
God Bless
Be Safe
Come Home
    -
Tears fall
Heart aches
Body shakes
Tears fall
    -
God Bless
Be Safe
Come Home
    -
Tears fall
Heart aches
Body shakes
Tears fall
    -
God Bless
Be Safe
Come Home
    -

Tears fall.

Come Home.

*Tear*

Author notes

I felt the urge to develop a mantra once and here lies the result. I'm not sure if it's too boring for you or if you can connect, but so be it, it is my mantra. and in case you wonder.. both mantra parts were taken from two previous poems.. a little hint to something or another. anyhow, i hoped reading this wasn't a waste of any dimension of the time you may have on this earth.

what d'ya think?

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  • ShInE45DoWn
    March 2, 2007
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    Loved.

    Lets collab on a write about him sometime.