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No Regrets

Missing image
Clearly you do not understand
exactly what you have at hand

A side of you
you do not understand
a way of life
you can not comprehand

I am the life force
that lives inside
give in
you must abide

You know I am here
it's just a matter of time
before you accept
you will not regret

~the Beast~

Author notes

Two words: Parrot Bay

The pic is the inner me.

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  • goddesskevauna
    February 27, 2007

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    Such power and force you got going here! And the beast writing it makes it so much better. Oooh, that beast of you gives me the chills. Oooh, I shudder, but I like it!

  • Sunshinegf
    February 26, 2007
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    i give it a passing score on it

    powerfull work on this masterpiece


  • owlishhunter
    February 26, 2007

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    Very good work! I know from where you write, my friend, and this is indicitive of beast! Just remember, you control her But, it is just a matter of time indeed! Bravo!!


    • vampira1665 silver member
      February 26, 2007
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      Wow, all I can say is...interesting. Not to your comment but to "my" poem.

      Thanks for the comment.

      Hugs,
      Me