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Seasons of Change

 

The winter sun glows bleak and cold,
over a barren wasteland of gray.
Trees stand twisted, gnarled, and old,
their cheery birds long flown away.
Bruise colored clouds float through the sky,
blemishes on dull, faded blue.
Caught on wind, snowflakes fly,
a winter ballet floating on its cue.
Watch waves freeze in their place,
by unforgiving December gales.
Frozen flowers, intricate lace,
each frigid petal telling a tale.

Springtime rain falling blue and clear,
dampened earth shaking its frosty spell.
Thawing lakes, half frozen mirrors,
melt water making deep, refreshing wells.
New life budding from deadened trees,
flowers casually peaking out their heads.
Sweet scents carried on the soft breeze,
over rolling hills, and heather beds.
A slight chill still clinging on,
refusing to loosen its sharp hold.
Winter weather ruling from dusk to dawn,
but during the day the sun is bold.

Summer heat cracking the ground,
in gashes long and deep.
Heat bugs making droning sounds,
pushing into your mind while you sleep.
The horizon bright shifting shades,
clouds dreamlike painted ships.
Then with darkness the scene fades,
and over earth's edge the sun sleepily dips.
Fully bloomed flowers elegantly stand,
slow breezes bending thin stems.
Cool grass, a velvet coating over the land,
staining Sunday dress hems.

Dead leaves an explosion of gold,
falling as colorful rain.
Icy winds taking their hold,
starting the spread of a bleak stain.
Long abandoned strips of beaches,
cool gray water lapping over stones.
The virus grasping eternity in its reach,
figures on the sand stand solitary and lone.
Plump apples ripe, falling from trees,
cornstalks high and brilliant bright.
Last of the honey produced by dying bees,
tepid weather giving up her fight.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Angelo di Luce gold member
    November 15, 2007

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    In silence admire your magic


  • Candy6
    June 6, 2007

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    out-standing poem. that is cool how used four seasons. this poem is so beautiful written. my favorite seasons are fall and spring. winter affects my mood to be a little bit sad. that is why i am so glad the sun comes out and the sun makes happy. sunshine cheers me up.


  • AutumnsFlame
    May 12, 2007

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    Seasons.... I'm not a huge fan of the topic... no offense, but seasons don't strike me as interesting. There is excellent imagery here, just no meaning.... I got kinda bored. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck.

  • Omfg.
    April 11, 2007
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    I can't possibly describe this poem, honestly. All I can say is: beautiful.

  • naked roots
    February 27, 2007

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    Ah sweet nature...very lovely. I liked the picture you chose to put with it.
    Thank you for entering my contest.

  • semperfimom39 gold member
    February 26, 2007

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    Excellent !!

    This is such a beautiful poem and the photo goes with it just perfect.. Great job!! Thank you for sharing..


  • gullionmar
    February 26, 2007

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    beautiful

    how true and colorful of all seasons poetry is well written,rhyming is awesome,graphic and pic fits perfect with such lovely poetry


  • Soulful Woman silver member
    February 26, 2007
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    No other word can describe this but breathtaking. The flow, the words, the visuals all outstanding in how you treat this piece. You wrote it with simplicity yet the impact was do astounding.
    Beautfiful in all ways.
    Soulful Woman

  • Amanda 88
    February 26, 2007
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    great I really enjoy it


  • Senkura
    February 26, 2007

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    Beautiful!

    Oh my god! This is so beautiful! Your delicate language has described the seasons so perfectly. It conjures up images of hazy days in the summer and walking throught the winter snow. I haven't read a poem this good for a very long time, and that's saying something. I don't know how long this toom you to write but it's completely perfect! Thank you so much for sharing this, it's brightened my day.

    Senkura.

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