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Paint My World Red

Swimming in an Ashtray
Full
of Hypocrisy and Greed-
Life
Tends to become A tad
Dull.

In the fashion of the
Marquee
Let's join a
Jubilee
You and I we'll paint the
Whole
World Red.

We can Purify
Seduction
Let it reign in
All
The ads. Place it on Every
TV.

The Elders shall
Faint
to
see our nature
Forced
On their way of
Life.

The Moon shall
Cry
and swallow a
Spork,
The man, his
Cheese
Shall mold.

Let's join in a Blood
Rage-
Put the Norm to
Rest
Everyone knew the world would
End
Someday.

Oh! How Sanguinely Supreme!

Let's get Lost in our
Illusion
Life is in the
Way
of Progress anyways.

One by One
They'll vomit and
Run
While You and I
Stab
Their boxes and
Paint the whole
Damn
World.

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Comments

  • Artemis Revenge
    May 25, 2007

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    I love this new style you are putting you're most recent poems. It's like an orgasm with words lol. Keep up the good work so I can steal them. lol j/k


  • ForgottenMemories
    March 1, 2007
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    sporks? awesome. xD the poem is good, alot of hate and anger in it. good job.


  • -Jarred-
    February 26, 2007
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    lol sporks? good job ^^

    <333

  • becky123
    February 25, 2007
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    woot for sporks!!!! i love how this so greatly protraits how much we all need a lil change in our lives by rebellon.