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forgotten

I sit in the darkness
of a skeletal frame
where is my conscience hiding?
in this dusty decline of latter years spent
dreaming of windmills to conquer
maidens honor to save
tilting my head in shadows and cobwebs
waiting for my cue to act
I am here
biding my time looking at hour glasses
with no sand to watch flow away
a surreal grip on unreality
where everything is fluid
and nothing really matters afterall
because I sit resolute in my resolve
too clever for words
and almost; always
forgotten...


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  • Lyre-Bird-
    March 9, 2007

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    Thank you for entering the contest!!!!!!

    Hope you have enjoyed the contest as much as we have enjoyed reading your entry

    Best of Luck
    Tracey


  • PerfectImperfection
    March 8, 2007

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    A really nice use of imagery here - a great interpretation of what the picture meant for you. Good luck to you in the contest!

  • Lyre-Bird-
    February 26, 2007
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    please put picture number or link that was used in author notes
    Tracey