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I wish

I wish I could've seen the stars,
When I had the chance to...
Now it's winter, and my starry sky,
It's just the dark covered in clouds.

My life is not a dream,
But it seems like all my wishes are,
And it happens that I think...
I wish...
I wish for the impossible.
My destiny's a road,
With ups and downs, and bad and good,
But the only perfect things...
They are...
My wishes for a better world.

Everything closes;it always ends;
Things don't last forever, not even the friends,
And when it's all over, I realize
There were only some stories, there were only some lies...
The only truth I seem to find...
it's in my wishes, from which I can't hide.


My life is not a dream,
But it seems like all my wishes are,
And it happens that I think...
I wish...
I wish for the impossible.
My destiny's a road,
With ups and downs, and bad and good,
But the only perfect things...
They are...
My wishes for a better world.

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A pretty little song

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  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    February 23, 2008
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    A great reflective piece and well worth the read. Excellent :D


  • moonspider
    March 14, 2007

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    Thank you for your comment

    this is beautiful, some great imagery and feeling are apparent here, "My destiny's a road" is a powerfull line.


  • MissStranger
    March 4, 2007

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    hmmmmm....

    ....hmmmmmm...I can imagine these intriguing lines putted on some guitar chords wonderful rhythm!not too very complicated yet far from being the childish foo-foo kind of poem!the scientific term for this is "blossoming talent"!yep....keep up and be creative!


    • masky
      March 5, 2007
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      Aw, you made me turn all red! I have a recording of myself singing- I must say it sounds childish foo-foo, with my high-pitched voice, haha!


  • olympia
    February 26, 2007

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    thrid line says "starry" just to let you know! Other than that its is a really good poem most people can relate to great job!!!

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