debris of lost thoughts
randomly scattered
quaked unconscious
in shattered reality
trembling in aftershocks
of forgotten emotions
flotsam and jetsam
in tears of happiness
it is beyond
my imagination
how I will ever
rebuild big enough
to accommodate
you...
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omg.
wow i love this one. really i do. very good. wow.
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Awesome my cyber genius! You created a “debris of lost thoughts” in between the lines that is obvious to even the intellectually challenged. Remarkable flow, terrific image and a question left at the end. A question to which I have the irrefutable answer which is: you’ve already done it. To put it eloquently; “I fuckin love you”.
Love, Amera
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.._. um ._.. well _._ _ I .._ _ _ ahh . ... hmmm ._.. OK .._. thanks! _._ _ FLY2
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wow this poem is... AMAZING the imagery is used remarkable well to all build up to a metaphor that is released on to us with an amazing entrance great job!
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Thanks for the kind words. It is easy to write when one is so inspired.
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