I see the girl,
sitting there,
flames dancing on her fingertips.
She looks over at me
with the reddest of eyes.
She gives me the quickest smile.
And disappears,
fire.
I see the girl,
sitting there,
liquid twisting at her feet.
She stares around,
noticing me,
with the bluest of eyes.
She disappears,
water.
I see the girl,
sitting there,
leaves twirling around her bod.
She turns her attention to me,
with the greenest of eyes.
She grins,
then disappears,
earth.
I see the girl,
sitting there,
the wind blowing around her hair,
She stares at me,
with the whitest of eyes.
She gives me a reassuring look,
and disappears,
Air.
I saw that day,
the beauties of:
Fire,
Water,
Earth,
and,
Air.
The Elements.
A contest entry
- Elements (Water, Fire, Earth, Air) by tabbykat10988.
600 points, ended February 27, 2007, 17 entries
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Comments
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i absolutely love the descriptions... and its glows so smooth and the style is great... thanks for entering and good luck in the contest...
-tabbykat
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this really good has good poetic visuals
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