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Spilt milk



The night was wiped away
by the sun's warm rays
and with its destruction
came salt-and-pepper tears.

Sometimes the memories strengthened.
Constricting an already-frail heart,
they stripped that glued mind apart,
everything intensified in the darkness.
Those useless sayings fell on deaf ears,
the pictures too strong, too powerful...

how could people
listen to those
    who said to never
        cry over spilt milk....

                          T h e y ' d  n e v e r  f e l t  l i k e  t h i s .

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Waste not fresh tears over old griefs.
-Euripides

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  • Internecine
    February 28, 2007
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    Is this about what I think it's about or am I just over analysing? Deeper meanings, whch I like.


  • perdisbeaute
    February 26, 2007

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    I love that quote and you wrote a very lovely piece to it. Great job!!

    Thanks so much for entering.