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Unfaithful

Like misplaced kisses
Your hands waver
Avoiding my hips
This is not what you came for
Fingertips of envy
Trace the history
Like graffiti
On the bathroom walls
Of crumbling plaster
My curves try to distract your eyes
Try to seduce you before the questions fly
This is not what you came for
Avoiding my hips
Your hands waver
Like misplaced kisses
Only looking for
Twisted fixes

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  • piccola silver member
    February 25, 2007

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    Good use of a strange line ...It had me waiting and waiting..you saved the surprise for the end; I like that.