Run the halls of Twightlight
Dance with me on the moon
Lose yourself in this world of mirrors and forgeries
Immerse your eyes in the words i whisper
Become mine
Let me own you
Or Fall.
Author notes
Lol. Woo.
A contest entry
- Brainfart by Nicole Hanna.
300 points, ended February 26, 2007, 13 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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There's something to be said for brainfarts, now isn't there? Pst... you have an extra "t" in twighlights, though I'm kinda enjoying it there for some odd reason. lol
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what's it got to do with brain farts.. i'm confused..
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A brain fart is something you didn't want to happen..but it did anyway. This poem is about Falling in love with someone, and then having them take control over you. Its a metaphor in general for people and their desire to abuse and destroy what they cannot have or are about to lose. It is a brain fart but it isn't. *shrug* i entered out of boredom.
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