*A* core for the beauty of essence
*B*lue roses surrounding the gates of heaven
*l*eaping upon wandering souls
*u*n mortifying their subsided peace
*e*ntering them into a phase of happiness
*R*eading the mind of a young maiden
*o*minus thoughts seemingly disappearing
*s*ending her heart into a peaceful diagram
*e*ncouragin her surreal thoughts to appear
Author notes
I haven't written a poem since god knows when -.- am just glad I finally came up with one lol - hope it's any good though o.0
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is gorgeous... I love the language use! I'm crazy about that lol! Keep up the good work, and I'll talk to you later.
Lea -
Many Scarlet kisses and applauses!!!
My darling one, this was amazing and I am most flattered. I sit with tears at the tenderness with which I just know you penned.
"*B*lue roses surrounding the gates of heaven"
This was my absolute favorite part. What a wonderous image this makes. Thank you ever so much for this poem about the roses I love with all my heart.
And please keep writing. You are very talented!
Your Lady Blue~
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