I know that you are broken
I have seen it in your face
But, like a shard of glass
It makes you more beautiful
As sunlight reflects
On your many fractured facets
I see rainbows on brick walls;
A broken person, a broken world
What could be more perfect?
A contest entry
- The Best Of The Rest by CapturedMoon.
700 points, ended May 25, 2007, 20 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Outstanding
I liked the simplicity of this poem, your choice of language and the extended metaphor. Beauty comes from within. I liked how you created contrasts in this poem between perfection and imperfection finding beauty in both. A fine poem with a great use of imagery.
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OOh, awesome concept, great metaphor!
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:)
wow, that was awesome! totally unique & ive never read nething else like it! keep it UP! -
Unigue and creative...well done
Thank you for sharing
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