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close your eyes

Close your eyes

Close your eyes
Open your heart
Oh miles may separate you
It may be hours in a car
But close your eyes
And think of that one person
The one who makes you smile
And even if a world is between you
You are together
So close your eyes

Please tell me what you think

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    February 26, 2007

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    this is good, i swear that i kid you not, this is amazing, you did a great job on this keep it flowing and you are one of my muses


  • Silvert119
    February 25, 2007
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    i think that good memories sometimes help us thru bad days. your poem portrays that.


  • moment liver
    February 25, 2007

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    Aww...that is so cute. Mark, did I ever tell you you were brilliant? Because you are most deffinetly. I love it. You never fail to write what's in your heart.

    see you around the deep end
    moment liver


  • Angel 19 1986
    February 25, 2007
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    This is cute.

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