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Do you see

Do you see

Do you see those stars?
They are yours
Do you see the sky?
It is yours
Do you see the love I have?
You always had it

Please tell me what you think

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    February 26, 2007

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    this is good, i think you have created a simple and yet strong way to tell someone you love them, keep it flowing


  • moment liver
    February 25, 2007

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    Aww Mark, that is beautiful. That's amazing. I love it. Keep writing from within.

    See you around the deep end
    moment liver