So nothing you ever told me was true
I expected as much from you
Honestly
You kissed me like deception
Like maleformed perfection
Afterbirth confessions
Bleeding from your betrayel
Into your mothers toilet
When were you going to tell me?
You saved the best for last
As always
Are you infuriated with me?
Do you resent the fact
That I will never ask
You to forgive me
For blasting your womb
With my disdainful
Blistering Magick?
Good
A contest entry
- Cynical Writers Welcome! by bw43.
549 points, ended March 13, 2007, 16 entries
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Comments
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is it about an abortion?
I liked this very much... the wording was awesome. I really liked the rhythm that it had. your sporadic rhyme worked well also.
The tone as a whole was completely cynical... beautifully cynically dark. I'm not sure if I should put a happy face or a sad face... I guess I'll put both. 
Anywho, thanks for your entry and good luck to you in the contest.
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I suppose that definitely fits the bill of cynical. lol. But startling as well.
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Startling, eh?
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