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Heaven and Hell

Sickly creeping vapors, announce themselves in the twilight
the once sacred ground now pounds with the breath of evil
shadows hide repulsive forms, where light holds no protection
and where the hurting clouds lay ravaged, torn between the
light or dark.
The shriek of demon and the song of angel
clash and battle
drawn together in perfect might;
Sulphate to Beauty
Poison to Grace
A battle of immense proportion heralds Heralds and Angels
and yet the irresistible serenity
of the light and the dark
draws us all
to eternal slumber.

Author notes

Urm I haven't written anything in a long while
and I just read edger allen poe
so
lol
x

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  • -Ink Artist-
    February 26, 2007

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    Interesting write! Very compelling and emotive. Your imagery is stark and the potency of your words is great. Thanks for your entry and good luck!

    ~Lori

  • Ellis Rose
    February 25, 2007

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    lol kudos my fello amigo.
    it feels like high school man.
    you have imprived.
    i nay have captain.
    safe.
    ps good poem
    pps mmm milk and cookies