Gliding through the sky a dyad of light and love,
Glistening stars a back drop sometimes hidden sometimes not
Spherical beauty always in motion,
Searching through space, attraction, gravity moving them on.
Wishes needing to be granted, hopes awaiting acceptance.
Fleeting moments of togetherness once in a while tease the two.
When together the awesome power revealed for all to see,
Perpetual, luminous, monumental,
Like the bands given in marriage, what a joyous meeting
One without the other is unimaginable
So much received from a correlation asunder,
By seemingly vast empty space.
Allowed but briefly to become close,
To meet as one together creating breathtaking moments,
Clarion unity exposing only dynamic love and respect for each other.
Once again they drift apart, only they feeling the invisible ties.
The binding continuing and expanding as force moves them on,
Parting this astonishing pairing, but temporarily.
Even apart they may be as one, one feeding the other
Always there, never truly apart
Light shining through, holding out a hand always.
Welcomed and absorbed, reflected outwardly,
Miraculous reciprocated servitude, for,
Hope, life, love,
God
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A contest entry
- Soul Mates by trista.
500 points, ended March 1, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - For all of my past contest-winners... by WhollySurrendered.
475 points, ended August 5, 2007, 17 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
The title is an anagram from words within the poem, if bored give it shot and let me know what you think ;) Oh and this is an anonomous contest so please no name :)
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very good poem. good luck in my contest.
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I love the poem~ The hidden anagram makes it so much more exciting~ I must be blind~ cause I have searched for it~ Purty please and let me know where it is~ It will drive me crazy til I find it.... I LOVE the poem over all ~ it's simply heavenly!
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wow so sorry I read this and then forgot all about it
the anagrams are in the first line.
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"Once again they drift apart, only they feeling the invisible ties.
The binding continuing and expanding as force moves them on,
Parting this astonishing pairing, but temporarily.
Even apart they may be as one, one feeding the other "
These lines are my favorites in the poem, which is not to say the rest isn't also beautifully done. But those lines especially say something that I have tried before to describe, but never to my satisfaction.
Your poem as a whole is something I can really sink my teeth ( and heart ) into. The complexity is astounding, yet written in terms easily enough understood. I think from reading this, you have a very good handle on "soul mates" and I truly hope this is written from personal experience. I didn't have a chance to work on the anagram, but it is a very creative idea! Thank you again for your entry and good luck in the contest.
All the best,
~J.
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Thanks for your productive comments I appreciate them lots
I will check your writes out in the near future.
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Wow
Wow
Wow
Ummm, can I cry now?
That was beautiful, what else can I say....
"hopes awaiting acceptance" for bloody real yeah.
"Allowed but briefly to become close" but hoping it was forever.
"holding out a hand always" ALWAYS.
"never truly apart" what may feel like a parting, is only a time of certain distance, in one aspect, but not another. The heart will always remain, there a parting never is.
"God" mwa
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can't believe this was nearly 2 years ago!
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This is a powerfully moving write, its heartfelt emotion and meaningful content has created an EXCELLENT poem. Well done and thankyou for sharing such lovely thoughts and Imagery with us.The more i read this write the more powerful it becomes a truly fabulous piece.
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Wow, this was so lovely and very deep. I enjoyed reading it. The best of luck to you in the contest.
Kari
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Your poem really deserves time for one to absorb the many layers it contains. I've read it a few times now, and each time I see things I'd missed before. I will be making further comments when the contest closes, but for now I thank you for your entry and wish you good luck.
Best wishes,
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Absolutely Wonderful
An absolutely wonderful write. Very deep in content. Lovely.
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