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A Walk With Death

As it ends,
The life of a loved one,
No one second thinks it
And so Death comes.
He beckons to me,
And I answer his call.
I walk with him
And fear not the fall,
He shows me the pleasures
And takes my pain,
Throws it all away
And makes me sane.
He shows me my loved ones,
Shows that they cared
But then they get over it,
And they're glad they were spared.
And so my walk with Death Comes to an end,
As he shows me a new home
And he becomes a new friend.

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  • anarchypyro
    February 28, 2007
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    I love it! I realy do.


  • EMOtionalDARKness17
    February 25, 2007

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    I like this but why cant it be so simple.... Things seem to get harder as they go but also in a was of becoming easier....Good write.


  • Fox-Reaper
    February 25, 2007
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    mmm i wish it was that simple to have pain go away but its not great write keep them comin