Adam was wise, and somewhat robust,
Adam had heart, and breaths on a gust.
Adam was warm, and sincere in voice,
Adam had chains in the Realm Of Rejoice.
Eve was all-fair, and kindly of ways,
Eve had a touch to light up the days.
Eve was all-gentle, and spoke oft so sweet,
But Eve had a mind of fickle defeat.
Adam and Eve were a pair in all fact,
Adam and Eve had a Godly contract.
The terms of this wrought, by one then the other,
And death swept the lands for father and mother.
End.
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I loved it! This was amazing. Very well done.


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oh long time no see. i've missed your writes. i love this, it's so....whimsical (so to speak).
really awesome write. the repetition adds a touch of wonderful sincerity.
LOVE IT!



