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Once Innocent

A mockery used with plagerism,
A binding on souls with end:
All I wasted with a single bound of a blossem,
Sent my life to an end.
Captivated,
Memorized-
A perfect fiction with sweat.
Taken and used,
A bounded heart of taking-
Cleared and revered of pain always dreamt.
Imitated release of breath -
A blinded girl of green,
Watch!
As my mind goes black -
A faded sexual gleam.
Tasted for what she was worth
And touched for the texture seen.

Please, think and tell.

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  • SCADstudent
    February 26, 2007

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    tawni are you aokay oi havem't heard from you in ages and i've heard that you have been in the hospitol what happened


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    February 25, 2007
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    oh and i wish i could do this twice

  • Disturbed Prodigy
    February 25, 2007
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    A perfect fiction with sweat.
    Taken and used,

    keep it flowing