Echoes bounce with bright colorful
whispers of deceit
impulsive ramifications of laminated lies
rot inside my brain
motivated disconnect intoxicating my senses
a volatile eruption imploding inside of me
flowing with transgressions
flecks of regret hang on my shoulders
the record player spins with static screams
and the song remains the same
Author notes
Title used "The Song Remains The Same"
A contest entry
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390 points, ended February 26, 2007, 13 entries
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Comments
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Now this sounds like a moment in my life... well penned hun, you have captured the title so well within this piece
Karen
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This is quite intense with such vivid and powerful imagery and metaphor. A great way to have expressed the title ;The Song Remains The Same. However, that title was supposed to be your title for this poem... x Love and light, Butterfly.
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very cool write with good metaphors and imagery...I miss my record player.lol
impulsive ramifications of laminated lies rot inside my brain...that was my favorite line
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