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The Song Remains The Same

Around every corner
is a new experience
that changes the beat of our drum.
The beat may change,
but the song stays the same.
The old familiar tune.
Sometimes for good,
sometimes for bad.
All changes must come.
But the Song remains the same.

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  • aGent Lemon
    February 26, 2007

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    First off, thank you very much for entering my contest.

    An acceptable metaphor, but I've heard a few songs that have that same mention and originality is what I'm mainly looking for.


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    February 26, 2007

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    A meaningful and sincere little write. Thanks so much for sharing and good luck in my contest... x Love and light, Butterfly.


  • A Poet Named Kyoto
    February 25, 2007
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    i love it


  • MiZZ-AmAyA
    February 25, 2007
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    I like this poem. I wouldn't change anything about it...It's very good