Once there was a girl
sad with no shoes on her feet
mothers love once felt
now only faded to nothing
each night as she sleeps
dreams to be like me
little dose she know that I once that little
girl with no happness in the eyes
mother lost with her own emontion
all thats is left is to cry
cuts on her arm mean nothing to me, for I have them too
never to love her any less, but to be ture
I will always be that little girl deep inside.
Please tell me what you think
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Wow Amy. This poem is AmAzInG!!! It is so so so sad! I love you! -
think this poem is sad. Some people have reasons for cutting and keep them secluded. There are a few spelling errors but none that'll make the reader confused- it'll just get the attention of some because spelling errors take away the feel of the poem. I thought this was a good write- Like looking at yourself in a mirror but looking even deeper.
Hugs x hearts
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