Spiderwebs are blocking my path to life
clinging to my arms and
pulling me back into my pain
I will never move on 'till they let go
For now their inhabitants are
crawling up my spine again.
And I flail my arms
and I shake them off
I move on to the future
I will not be defeated by something so weak
A contest entry
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390 points, ended February 26, 2007, 13 entries
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Comments
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This is so vivid and expressive. A great piece! Thanks for sharing and good luck in my contest... x Love and light, Butterfly.
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!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!perfection!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Overall, this is unique in it's mastery of something so weak, as to bring us down. Your flow for this non-rhymer is very fluid all the way thru!!! Contest or no contest, This Rocks!!!
Take care,
Brian.
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