It's a good thing that we're both trying to move on
after everything that we've gone through.
I don't want everything to get f.ucked up again
& I don't want to hurt you.
The past 3 years have been f.ucking crazy
& so many things are still a mess.
As much as I love and care about you
moving on without you is what's best.
No matter how hard either of us tried
both of our worlds still fell apart.
& now 3 years have gone down the drain
I wish we would have known this from the start.
I am doing alright with what I have right now
& I hope that you are too.
It would be really nice if you were happy for me
because you know that I'm happy for you.
All of our plans for the future will never happen
& I never thought that I'd be saying these words.
But I am finally going to try to let you go Michael
no matter how f.ucking bad it hurts.
Author notes
I have been trying to get over Michael & trying to forget the good & bad memories....it's one of the hardest things I have ever tried to do.
Please tell me what you think
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I love you!
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Good
I like allpoetry cause it's like u can just express every single feeling u have good or bad I read this and was thinking if I should even comment though because i'm 11 and ur almost 16 y would u care what an 11 year old said says but if u don't mind I just want to say I think this is really good better than mine and since it says please tell me what I thought i think u should writwe like something retarded and funny I git lot's of comments in my funny poems... anyways it was pretty good!
Love,
~♥Freddy♥~
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Well written. I love the wording. trying to move on is something you have to do, no matter how hard it is. A really good poem.
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I really liked this. Maybe it's because I can relate to the feeling. It was a great piece of work. :-)
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I like this such maturity showed here , some never acquire such knowledge my dear consider yourself very lucky...I love the sincerity of this piece I really do...excellent
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great job hun, Iwish you the best!
♥
JoJo
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Great job!
You have done a wonderful job with this piece! Great use of emotion to show the hurt and disappointment from the failed relationship. I like the way that you conveyed "moving on" and wishing the best for him also. I enjoyed reading this write! Great job! Debi
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This is a great poem hun. I love it. I loved it when I first read it. lol I still do. I will always be here for you hun. These years have been crazy for you and I'm sorry you had to go through them. I love you soo much Kayleigh. Keep up the amazing writing. ♥
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Oh sweetheart, this poem is so amazing! It's good that you're trying to move on. And you're right, it does hurt and it is hard. But it's the right thing to do, and I'm glad that you realize that now. You're too sweet of a girl to hurt all the time, and I'm not the only person who knows that. This poem is amazing and it draws you in right from the first line. Keep penning, hunnie, and I'll keep reading.
s and 
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---Siempre luchando, paz y revolucion,
~Kami
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