TORN BETWEEN TWO
I should never have fallen in love with her
I should have listened to my heart and left
I am so ashamed of what I have done
My girlfriend is at home waiting as I sit here
Lost in silence, torn between two women
Two women that I love so much
I don't know what I am going to do
But, I know that I have to come clean
I have to tell them both what I have become
I have to take responsibility for my selfish mistakes
A contest entry
- More titles by Lavender Butterfly.
390 points, ended February 26, 2007, 13 entries
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Friends, I appreciate your comments and review on this write. However, please do not add my name to your comments due to the contest rules. Thank you very much!
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uh oh. what a predicament
This really makes me wonder why there were two in the first place and who was picked. hmmm...making of a good short story.
*Rianna
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Written with such expression and reality. Thanks for sharing and good luck in my contest... x Love and light, Butterfly.
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glad this is an entry and not the real thing LoL
If it was I would hate to be you. yet this type of thing happens all the time, not that it is right, but i guess it really is possible to be in love with 2 at 1 time.
Great job my poet friend. Good luck in the contest
Manyblessings2u & yours
Joyce
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Thank you Joyce!
Jeremy
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wonderful
well written, wellexpressed. i think this was awesome. of course i know you'll choose me, lmao, u better,,, hey you hear me j/k well done love.
I love you always.
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Well written. This would be a hard place to be. And telling both would be the right thing to do. Good luck in the contest.
Jeannie
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