The cobwebbed window to my old soul
reveals countless hours unlived
years bridled behind four walls
waiting for perfect prey
but he never came
I alone with
spiderwebs
full of
dust
A contest entry
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390 points, ended February 26, 2007, 13 entries
Gold trophy winner
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Hood-wink! I hope you're feeling better soon!
This piece was short but very expressive, sad and very beautiful at the same time. I don't really know what else to write because I am really in awe at this poem...
A well-deserved gold trophy.
Love,
Annie 
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Emotive...
Gosh this is beautifully set out...congratulations for the gold award...this is so sad, yet a pleasure to read at the same time, if you can understand that
It has really touched me and that is hard to do in such a short piece as this, but you have done it here, it is very engaging but also very expressive emotionally...it describes searching, waiting and a longing, and I feel this overpowering sadness through your words...your writing leaves a vivid impression
You have been hood-winked by a friend
Much love
~Lilac
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This is truly expressive and so well written. Thanks so much for sharing and good luck in my contest... x Love and light, Butterfly.
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Wow what a great poem so full of emotion and pain. So deep and dark. Good luck in the contest
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a great poem sis, there are days when I feel like I have cobweb in my soul. wonderful write sis
much love
your brother john
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Wow, great one. I like the style you wrote it in. Good job.
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