I feel as though my heart lay bleeding
On a countertop.
The pain is like a flooded scream
That cannot, will not stop.
I cannot live, I cannot breathe;
Pain is all I do.
I cannot think how I can be
Long living without you.
Ah, God! I want you back so bad
That I would gladly die
To hold you in my arms again
And not care how or why;
To hold you in my arms again
And tell you of my love,
And then go gladly back to dust
Should I your heart not move.
Please tell me what you think
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Your writing with deep emotions. Can feel the pain your friend was going through. Nicely done.
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I Like this poem alot...Even though you wrote It for someone else, you still described the feelings very well.... -
Good write...you wrote this for a friend? I did that once, about a year ago for my sister too...I think it was appreciated, so im sure yours will be too!! Again, good write!
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