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Living Dead Girl

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She is living but she is dead inside.
Painful memories invade her mind.
A stepfather who hurt her so.
Molested and beaten and left for dead.
All childhood memories are gone with the wind.
Her mind is protecting her from them
A living dead girl is what she has become.
The world passes her by without a care.

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  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    March 4, 2007

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    TEARS OF SADNES

    She is living but she is dead inside...those painful words are for so many young and innocent.

    Molested and beaten and left for dead.and this wicked world just see's nothing...This just ripes the heart out of me...So many of us all that have had stepfathers knows this kind of hurt and shame...But we are the winners they lose,they have to live with who they are and we can heal with alot of love*rose*


  • Sacred Ground
    February 26, 2007

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    Sis, Everytime I read of your pain, my heart just cries for you. This write is one that should be read to other victims so that they know they are not alone with these feelings. You are a testimony to others through your poetry, and I am very proud of you for having the courage to bring all this out through your writing. God Bless. I love ya, Sis.
    LisaMarie


  • Inside and out
    February 25, 2007

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    This is incredibly sad. I am praying that this is not a true write. There are many people in this world who do care about you and appreciate you for the wonderful person that you are.

  • LIve For Today
    February 25, 2007
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    I am here if you need me ,


  • Spiritual Nature
    February 25, 2007

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    Awww. You are alive my dear, breathing, a mother, a wonderful wife, they, the past, can't take that from you ever. I love you, sweetie.


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    February 25, 2007

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    Very sad and so deeply expressed. Thanks so much for sharing and good luck in my contest... x Love and light, Butterfly.


  • Lady Altheia
    February 25, 2007

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    Hey I thought we agreed no more sad poems???? I guess I will have to tickle you some more. *tickle tickle tickle x 1000* I am grounding you from writing any more sad poems for a whole month.

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