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Blue

Higher Than The Cloudy Skies That Can Create Our Endless Imaginations With Its Practical Beauty Drifting Through Spacious Blue Circling Back To Its Birthplace Forever Treading Its Fated Circle Of Life

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  • Beauty Of Silence
    June 26, 2008

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    wow!

    fantastic! this was beautiful... but it left me craving for more! keep pennig kays!

    AWESOME!


  • silent shame
    April 15, 2007
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    it needs more, it catches you, and stops. but it sounds so beautiful


  • SheistheLorax
    April 5, 2007
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    I can't believe that I never commented on this. Damn it, I even named it for you. But I suppose it doesn't matter anyway. God knows if you'll ever even see this comment. God knows if you're even still alive, because I sure as hell don't know.

    But the poem... it's beautiful. I told you then, and I tell you again.