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Just Waiting...

Sitting in the corner...
[just waiting]
crying tears of innocent
b
l
  o
    o
      d
[just waiting]
        my broken wings
        can no longer
              f
                l
                  y
        so here I sit
      [just waiting]


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  • HugsForEveryone
    February 27, 2007
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    I liiiiiike AGAIN

    I really liked this poem, and I just wanted youto know.


  • chaostheory89
    February 25, 2007

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    this is an excellant piece of work i love how blood and fly are split it sounds like it should be the chorus to a song

  • She Stole My Voice
    February 24, 2007

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    "my broken wings
    can no longer
    f
    l
    y
    so here I sit
    [just waiting]"


    This is great dollface.
    I hope you don't mind me bookmarking this

    Keep up the killer work, take care, and keep on writing!

    ~Princess of Shadows~


  • daruvial
    February 24, 2007
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    wow

    that poem is beautiful and sad at the same time.