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When Did everything Change

When did we stop touching
Was it when you were gone for seven months
When did we stop talking
You just are so cold now and you dont talk to me
When did you start to call me names
You take another drink from the wiskey bottle
And it makes me want to hit you
I hate you for all the things you have put me through
I dont understand what i ever did to you
I have been here for you when no one was around
You said that you loved me, but when i fell you werent around
I dont understand what went wrong and why things had to be flipped up side down
I thought that i loved you, and i still think i do
But how can i love you when you say "Fuck You"
I hate it when you call me names and make me feel like nothing
I am pregant again with your child, but you dont seem to even notice
I wish that things were how they once were
I know that im not happy with you
and your not happy with me
So can you tell me donny WHEN DID EVERYTHING CHANGE????

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I am sorry but i had to just write that, im really emotional again of course, but my ex ol man is such a ass!!

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  • dizziCJS420
    July 28, 2008

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    he went to prison 4 7 months because of your deciet, your lies come off your lips like the lies in your shitty poetry. you are truely a work of the devil as is your piece of shit mother. so if you want comments on anything then try writing truth, you cant though can you. you ues to put makeup on and go to school crying lies about black eyes where u slander this shit. my comments are your a nigger that deserves the immediate judgement of our God. you snake YOU KNOW what God is gonna do with your bitch ass


  • tawk gold member
    March 5, 2008
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    Again what a sad and heartfelt write full of vivid emotion and pain. I hope things have gotten better since last year at the time you wrote this poem. How is your baby doing? I hope well. Theresa

  • GDoubleEK
    March 21, 2007
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    Amber I love you! If you ever need anything or someone to talk to call me! 314 550 4507

  • bigtmmy
    March 4, 2007

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    very expresive

    Amber I am sorry that you found a man that doesn't treat like you deserve to be treated You don't need to be with him you can do a lot better I don't know why a lot of girls fall for assholes and then they complain that all guys are that way but you just haven't found the right guy there are nice guys out there but you'll never find one if you stay with him well I'm sorry I haven't been there for you I guess I'm not that nice of a guy either well I just want to let you know that I'm there for you and I will always be your friend I hope everything works out

  • Torn Broken Heart
    March 2, 2007

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    wow

    wow amber im so sorry that your going through all that if you want to call me sometime and talk or just t say hi heres my cell 636-232-7677 i miss you gurl i hope you do alot better soon


  • TwiztedAndAlone
    February 26, 2007

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    Very Deep

    Aww Amber I'm so sorry that you're going through this again...it makes me really mad that he treats you the way that he does. I thought that maybe he would change after you guys had Madison and be more supportive of you. I love you so much sweety and I wish that there was something I could do to help. Just hang in there okay and let me know if there is anything I can do. Take care of you and those babies okay?! *hugs*

    Saraness

  • tawk gold member
    February 25, 2007

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    I am so sorry that you had to experience this. I hope that things will get better for you. Congrats on the new baby coming.

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