Imagine
no Lennon
~Try very hard~
It wont be easy
Imagine
Imagine
the people,
~The faceless places~
No heaven nor hell
Imagine
Imagine
Life today
~No Lennon's music~
A stringless generation walking
Imagine
Imagine
Everthing's impossible
~All are escapist~
We are not dreamers
Imagine
Imagine
No peace
~Songs don't exist~
Musicians never live...never
Imagine
Author notes
This is for one of the greatest musician who ever lived. For all of the musicians who inspires all the people around the world. A single man can always contribute a lot to all of us. We are all contributors of the things past, present, and future.
Thanks for the having a wonderful contest.
Form used:
MODERN CINQUAIN has a more haiku-like quality and focuses on number of words per line, rather than syllable count.
Line 1: One word
Line 2: Two words
Line 3: Three words
Line 4: Four words
Line 5: One word
CROWN CINQUAIN – a 5 stanza cinquain chain.
A contest entry
- To Musical Legends We Have Lost. by James Barrett.
375 points, ended February 25, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Poems and Songs by gentle breeze.
495 points, ended June 4, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is an interesting structure. I think your poem really compliments the song it was inspired by. Thanks for entering.
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a good piece here i think personally i prefer the traditional cinquain but this is still very good
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hi. send me the lyrics in your author notes please. thanks.
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Thank you soooo much for entering. I truly appreciate it. I know the song the poem is based on but can you leave me an online link to the lyrics or the lyrics themselves in your author notes please? Thanks much
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Very creative, i really liked the flow.
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