The despair that drowns you.
The side of you they never see.
A pool of misery you're diving into.
And all you can think of is death:
The one answer to everything,
Just the thought of taking your own last breath.
For so long, painful sadness was all you saw
Whilst everyone else was blind.
Yet, they think you as the erearasable flaw.
With each waking moment life gets harder
And you get weighed down even more
By those memories of your lost ardor.
Remember this voice that calls to you,
The one that wants to bear.
As you struggle to continue through
Please think of this voice that cares.
Author notes
Someone in this world loves and cares about you! (and i mean an actually person).
A contest entry
- I Just Want To Die... So Why Don't I Now? by xxRainbowDawnxx.
300 points, ended March 2, 2007, 10 entries
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Thanks for caring, it's nice to feel something... To have something to be thought of. It just hurts me bad that nobody cares. I told my ex I was going to kill myself, he said he still loves me but he just said he needs sleep and said he's going to switch his phone off and that if it's important I should phone him... Heartless. I can't help having a big heart and being a sensetive soul but it destroys me... Being an empathic rose is sometimes like a deeply poison, but it hits the alchemist instead of the customer...
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