So now she says that I would have had a chance
after all that she has put me through,
she finally gives me her glance.
She said that she would love me
more than she loves him.
That it could be me with her
instead of him whispering in her ear.
And that she has always wanted me,
even before we were friends.
But would I be willing to take her
and risk my heart's second chance?
Please tell me what you think
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i would change the word glance on the 3rd line due to it rhyming with the 1st line and its out of sink with the rest of the poem.. buttt i really love the way you end your poem with a question how very clever..well wrote its lovely laura xx
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