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Sex Slave

I'm your sex slave
What's your pleasure
Your hunger I can not measure


But tonight we will turn it around
It will be you who is bound


I'll make your hunger grow and grow
To the point where you'll never let go


I'll kiss you in that way
Up and down your body I'll play
Then maybe I'll stay
 A minute or two

Just to watch what you'll do


Your writhing in joyous pain
And then up and down again and again


Ahh what's the matter hun


Can't touch me........ My what have I done


Release me....... you say
No not today
I'm not through with you yet
You can't get away


Is my body to close
Oh no problem there
I can step back a bit
And let you just stare


I'll sit in this chair
And open wide
So you can really look inside


I oh so love the look on your face
As you did mine, last night dressed in lace
You need me now
Oh I'm not through yet
Tonight I swear you'll never forget



*Rdrl*

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  • LadyUnique silver member
    January 15, 2008

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    evocative and erotic without going overboard into pornland i enjoyed the casual rhyme you've used. thank you for your entry and good luck


  • army2005
    February 27, 2007

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    hmmmmmmm

    WOW what more can i say to have a love one to give that to you thats all that a man can ask for right. GREAT poem wish my ex-wife could of read this and learned things.

    • Deepredvelvet
      February 27, 2007
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      Thanks for your comment
      Maybe you should have her read this too
      You never know what it might do!


  • elemental angel
    February 25, 2007
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    MMMMmmmm

    My mrs this is Hot, Hot, Hot.
    Bravo


  • Laura
    February 24, 2007
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    wow this is perfect in every last way totally amazing laura xx

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