Such a memory
Like medal in my mind
Such a victory
To break into and find
I think I miss the way
You treated me back then
They way I was the broken
The beaten
The sin
And I think I like the way it feels
I think I like the wave of drugs
When nothings really there
Such a morphine caused love
I wish we could share
In a nightmare so deep
Like steel we repeat
A neverending lie
Back up
Lets do it all again
Just the taste
To know whats wrong
To know whats right
To know that you're ruining your life
Yet I think I like it a little more
Heat ecscapes from every core of my mind
Eyes wide
Heart wild
I think I like the drunken feeling
The hopeless dreaming
I think I like the endless falling
I wont keep calling
the broken
The beaten
The sin
I am the end
A contest entry
- Hum Hallelujah by shewalksintomine.
900 points, ended March 7, 2007, 3 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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wowye loverly, this is great. lalalahve it to the core. this is great. i love reading your work, though i havent had much time to comment on it.
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Oh boy. I really didn't expect poems of this high caliber. This is fantastic and I'm not just saying that. I mean it.
My favorite part was "the broken, the beaten, the sin." I don't know what your mindset was when writing this, but it doesn't sound pleasant!
Please don't respond to this comment until after the contest, so that I may be fair in my judging. Thanks for entering! Great pen!
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