Even if many years from now,
Life finds us in separate places.
My fondest memories of you,
It never can erase.
You'll always be able to tell,
I knew you once...
Very, very well.
A contest entry
- Short & Sweet and Really Upbeat {Edit} by HerbalGoat.
300 points, ended March 13, 2007, 24 entries
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Very cute and loving, and the picture fits perfectly with it, as well. I have only a minor revision suggestion for you. I would remove all your punctuation at the end of a line, except for L6.
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man... you're so good...
I love this one..
*your biggest fan*
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Thanks for the compliment and the applause.
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Lovely verse, one should always keep a special place for memories of friendship/love.
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Thank you for your wonderful comments.
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Excellent...what a story fit into few words! You are really writing today. I'm enjoying all of them!
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Thanks again, I can't keep up with you, but I have been writing almost all day.
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Awwwww I love the picture, such a wonderful and loving poem. I so loved it. Good luck in the contest
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Thanks for your kind words and applause. This wasn't originally for a contest, but I just wrote it today, because I felt like it, then realized it fit this contest I was in. Thanks again.
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