you in my life
I can not tell you
What it is you mean to me,
The feelings you stir,
You are all that I see.
My life without you,
What a chaotic mess.
Me with you,
I know I am trully blessed.
Nights of unparallel passions,
Sweet caresses, tender kisses,
Being held in your arms,
This is some of what my soul trully misses.
All I wish to do
Is climb the highest high,
Screaming to the world,
You are trully mine.
In less than 2 weeks,
We are to be as one.
Ending your travels of hell,
Yet our journey has just begun.
I love you so much,
I wish you could see,
How I feel for you,
So deep inside of me.
You quench my thirst,
Quiet my fears,
Fufill my hunger,
Even drys my tears.
With you I belong,
There is no other for me.
Surrounded in your love,
I trully am to be.
Please tell me what you think
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This was such a sweet poem. Actually you spell it "truly." There is not two "l's" and there is no "e." Look it up if you don't believe me. Again great write.
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love it!
-looks around- Ok i scertly love , love poems there sweet and wounderful, yeah so i'm a big softy. But love is somehting that happens to everyone. -
"I know I am trully blessed.""This is some of what my soul trully misses.""You are trully mine.""I trully am to be." All these lines have the same problem and it is just the one word trully it should be truely. Other then this it was a great write thank you for sharing this.
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DAMN! This poem makes me feel everything... it makes me feel the love the passion and the desire you have by writing this poem
With you I belong,
There is no other for me.
Surrounded in your love,
I trully am to be.
That was the best ending to any poem I have ever read... you have a lot of talent... keep it up...
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Full of passion and the expectancy of the desires that are about to be fufilled, this poem is full of life and love and is well worthy of Gramp's applause.
Georges.
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lovely
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