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My Chance

this is my chance to march one bye one with the rest.
this is my chance to improve my mind.
this is my chance to improve my body.
this is my chance to improve my spirit.
am I ready for the challenge?
can I stand the test of time after this?
this is my chance!
is this what I’m meant to do?
am I up for this?
can I pass the test?
will I fall in a group of drop outs?
can I be the best I can be?
and do the best I can do?
will I be apart of the group that screams united we stand divide we fall one bye one kill them all?

I NEED TO KNOW WHAT YOU THINK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • Aalta silver member
    June 20

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    God.... so many questions... come on have faith in yourself....
    the poem is good has good flow and seems very... connected.. continuous
    I like it!!