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Sleeping Beauty

Here I lie
imprisoned in the wire
that trips you-
your eyes frozen on my face
your hands slashed from my defenses-
a thousand years have passed
I wait for a prince who can cut through these barbed thorns
overgrown with roses
that burst from my heart-
a prince who will come
but find his sleeping beauty dead:
the spindle stabbed through her soul.

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  • branislawa
    March 1, 2007
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    So sad... I love it! ^___^ lol, it's really cool


  • Artemis Gem
    February 24, 2007
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    interesting...I like this.
    Keep ti up!

    pegleg

  • deleteit
    February 24, 2007

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    Bitter sweet love ... waiting...aching...yearning only to find it...too late. Interesting. Thanks for entering