You will die before a meaningless God,
in this unholy world in which you reside.
Your breath will fall short, and your body
will stiffen, as the cold creeps upon your
unwanted soul. Your eyes will close for
eternities to come, as you lie in the
dark all alone and await the judgement
that will condem your soul to the
firey Hell in which you belong.
The flames will consume as you
scream from the pain, your eyes will
explode, and your blood will boil.
Torrents of hot fluids will gush from
your wounds as the demons batter your
soul. You are trapped with no escape and
no help from beyond. For the Gods feel no
remorse for their unwanted children.
BWA HA HA! they will say with glee.
You will die.
A contest entry
- Anything Dark by satan-.
460 points, ended March 2, 2008, 75 entries
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Comments
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Ooh, I loved it
Dark and chilling, but yet, light toned at the same time! That is EXTREMELY hard to do, but you did it wonderfully! Thanks for entering!
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wow that is so good did you make that up or what
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This is suppose to be uplifting. This is not what the contest is about. I will have to DQ you.
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