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Turn To Die

Just another day
In the city that never sleeps
Car horns...
People in a rush...
Ambulence sirens...
Traffic...
Taxis...

Walk.
Don’t walk.
Walk.
Don’t walk.

[jaywalk]

Walk.
Don’t walk.
Walk.
Don’t walk.


.. JUMP ..

Tires screech
A piercing scream
Whiplash

S  i  l  e  n  c  e

From the sidewalk
A timid voice dares to speak.
"What happened?"


Doors open.
A driver steps out
Somehow, his wave of nausea is forced back
Unlike the blood running over his tires
His hands suddenly tremble on their own
"What have I done..."

A woman can be seen
Running toward the scene
She sees the car
She sees the blood
She stops dead in her tracks
Her face is numb.
She cries,
"MY BABY...MY BABY...WHY...??"

Author notes

Every so often I get so depressed that I'll be tempted to jump in the middle of speeding traffic...but I'd never go through with it.

Because I know what would happen afterwards.

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  • Digital-coma
    June 14, 2007

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    OMG

    THIS IS SOOOOO SAD!!! WOW, THIS IS POWERFULLY WRITTEN. It made you want to keep reading on.....holy SHIT. THIS IS WONDERFUL AND VERY EMOTIONAL

  • Faery of death
    March 3, 2007
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    You get better everyday...


  • blondevamp
    February 27, 2007

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    wow
    this is really sad and depressing
    but at the same time frealing amazing
    this is an awsome poem
    VERY thought provoking!


  • PoeticallyTintedSml
    February 24, 2007
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    i am speechless!!! wow... that is realy all that i can say... keep it up!!

    ~Tonks~


  • Dokuritsu
    February 24, 2007
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    This is deep... and depressing. Also slightly disturbing, but good job anyway!

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