so tell me;;
sugar-face...
am I even uglier naked-
doubled over your moldy toilet-
than I was
Before you took my hair down & touched me?
Before you made me what I am.
Your face still resides
beneath my transparent, camouflage skin-
shredding apart
all my curves you claimed I had.
& I'll do every.single.thing. it takes
just to prove you wrong.
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I love you dolllllllllyyyyyy!
xxx ♥
-crashers.
hmm.. this is lacking something. but I don't know exactly what yet.
In a list
A contest entry
- *Say Cheese* by Hell In Harmony.
425 points, ended February 25, 2007, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ♥ Do You Bleed Glitter? ♥ by Dead Star--x.
450 points, ended March 22, 2007, 61 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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you are always beautiful.
gorgeous.
stunning.
a masterpiece.
you are. you are. you are.
ily <3
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you are the queen of short dirty pretty poetry babydoll! and the picture is amazing! luv it! thanx for entering! ♥ good luck
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so tell me;;
sugar-face...
am I even uglier naked-
doubled over your moldy toilet-
than I was
Before you took my hair down & touched me?
what a starter. woah. you work is really good.
i found you on my sisters fav list. katie. i can see why she loves your poetry. :] i just got a site so i have hardly anything.
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oooh!! fresh meat!!!!!
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funn... *mischevous grin.*
annnyways. are you ACTUALLY her sister? or a "sister" ?
I'll be sure to keep updated on your work, kay?
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im actually her blood sister. lucky me? thanks that means alot. she is like god in comparison to my stuff. im such a noob its sad. haha
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am I even uglier naked-
doubled over your moldy toilet-
than I was
Before you took my hair down & touched me?
wowww amazing
i love the idea i often wonder which is kind of how women look before sex and after sex and how different they look when the lights are turned on and i guess that reminds me of this and that and
love it
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thanks for the comment my dearest.
I need to get around your page- I've bookmarked all your new poems, but haven't had enough time/energy/braincapacity that your writes deserve to read them yet.
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all i have to say.
is that i absolutely freakin' love you girl.
you && your gorgeous words.
lets makeout. -
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yesplease!!
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Aw, this is sad but has a touch of anger I feel.
"am I even uglier naked"
and
"Before you took my hair down & touched me?"
--remind me of me ... not in the boney structure way ... just a scar filled way that causes me to be very cautious around people so they won't get to see them
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Darling!!!!!
this first stanza leaves me breath-less
and numb,
Wishing I could just reach out and help
the girl buired in your beautiful words.
love this line to:
& I'll do every.single.thing. it takes
just to prove you wrong.
Your descriptions through out this were spot on, and I loved the inspiration you pulled from the picture.
Your amazing Crash!
Keep the ink flowin
thanks for enterin
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