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Chained

Im here and Im chained.
Just standing here waiting.
Ive not gained.
I am only waiting for the end.


The cuts on my wrists dont mean a thing.
i loved you to the bottom of my heart.
I am mute but I can Sing.
sing with all my heart.

Love may not matter to you but you broke my heart and let the blood flow.
The Devil picked up a quill and filled out the fine on my wrists.
Now I think that at first, I was low.
now I know who was the lower one.

Im here and Im Chained.
just standing here waiting.
Ive not gained.
I am only waiting for the end.

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  • forgotten souls
    March 20, 2007
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    this is a great poem
    it means something more than what you wrote great write


  • Christa Steiner
    March 16, 2007
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    THIS IS AWESOME

    THIS ROCKS THIS IS THE BOMB


  • TheMoodchangingPoet
    March 9, 2007

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    If that is based on a personal experiencve then I'm sorry... But it was very good. I liked it.
    Well done. Good job.
    Keep it up!


  • February 28, 2007
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    I really like it

    I thought it was awesome i really thought that you did a excelent job.............


  • fish-bubbles
    February 26, 2007
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    good job

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