Table set with food and wine
Hymns to sing of love divine
Eating and conversation
Last supper invocation
All disiciples gathered round
Son of Man and twelve were found
Told of one who would betray
Sitting with the Lord that day
Upon the table loaves of bread
Passover drink, wine of red
Partake wine as blood from me
Eat thy bread as my body
Rejoice I shall return to thee
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A contest entry
- ACROSTIC TIME #2 by Samplette.
300 points, ended February 26, 2007, 13 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I am here to comment on another of your poems... and I am glad I found this one
I love acrostics and I especially love them if they also rhyme. You've combined this great form with a message that is definitely worth being heard. Thank you for sharing your amazing talent!
Keep up the wonderful work!
Annie
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Hey, this is an awesome poem you have here! The rhyming was great and the flow was really good as well. This was a really good acrostic poem I must say. Anyways, awesome job with this, I enjoyed reading it!
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I love this, the rigym is beautiful and the beat has so much rhythm. Great job. :fSam
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< live for today
Many thanks for the very kind words about my poem.
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< Sandy !
I loved you're poe, The Last Supper ! t was truly great. Keep up the great work. -
Beautiful
Fantastic Sandy, super job I love the last line. I often find myself thinking of what must have been going through Jesus mind as he told of these things to be and knowing the fate it would bring him. Oh the example of faith he displays and the lesson of love he gives. God bless. Awesome write. Truly Enjoyed the message of this fantastic write.
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Great Comment
Thank you June,
love your comment my friend. Take care, many blessings to you. Sandy 
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bravo bravo
ooh I loved this one to bits
I love the last supper, and I have a great porcelen setting on my fireplace, this was a wonderful wonderful Acrostic.
Many blessings with this one
Love and LIght
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Lovely Comment
Thank you Frozentearz, Your comment was great and most appreciated. Hope all is well with you. Many Blessings. Sandy
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Excellent !
Sandy,
I love you're poem. Being highly religious myself I love you're use of similies and metphors. Keep up the
great work. I abolutely love you're writing !
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a wonderful acrostic! i really like this! it flows well from one letter to the next. you did a superb job with this. keep writing and i look forward to more of your words. God bless you always
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Lovely Comment!!!
Hello Dedilynn, Your comment was so nice and most appreciated my dear friend,it is always a pleasure to hear from you. You take care sis, Always, Sandy
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verygood
I think you got every thing in there a very important story .One we all know so well. good job -
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Nice Comment
Hi Ricky, Thank you for the nice comment. It is most appreciated. You take care, Sandy
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Enriched as whole!!!
The pattewrn form is perfection in itself, and a sublime sense of whereabouts it gave, Bravo...
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Nice Comment
Hello Titus, Thank you for stopping by anmd reading my poem. Your comment was most appreciated. You take care, Sandy
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you just can't beat a great acrostic, it feeds the mind like a feast, and we have all fed well today. well done Sister.
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Great Comment
Hello Mike. Many hugs and smiles. I hope your Sunday is going well for you and yours
Thank you for the nice comment. Always so nice to hear from you. Take care, Sandy
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A very nice poem, although I think Judas would have misgivings about being betrayed as the "betrayer" in light of the recent discovery of the book Judas, which establishes him as the closest disciple to Jesus, and in whom Jesus entrusted the task of turning him over to the Roman guards. Other than that, the piece has a nice flow and rhythm to it.
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Great Comment
Hello, Thank you for stopping by and reading my poem. I so enjoyed your comment. Take care, Sandy
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Bravo!
What a wonderful writing. So filled with truth. Good imagery rhyme and rhythem. I like the picture. When I was a child and growing up my parents had a copy of DeVinci's Last Supper.
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Lovely Comment
Hello Katie, Your comment was so nice and most appreciated. Thank you for stopping by. Take care, Sandy
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very nice write sandy have a great day
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Nice Comment
Hello, Always so nice to hear from you. Hope all is well with you. I always appreciate your stopping by and commenting. Take care, Sandy
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WONDERFUL!
This is a beautiful telling of story which we all know so well, Your words flow so easily along in my mind.
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Wonderful Comment
Good Morning Kevin, Always a pleasure to get on in the morning and see a comment from my dear friend. Always brings a smile. I hope all is well with you. I guess you are awaiting the storm coming our way. Thank you for this great comment. I always appreciate your thoughts!! You take care and many Blessings to you. Always, Sandy
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DEAR SANDY
Seeing your beautiful poem about the last supper brings to me thoughts of a recent movie called THE DIVINCI CODE. It brought about some pretty heated arguments but I found it inspirational. I guess I see things differently than most. This is a very beautiful my dear friend and I truly enjoyed it so much.
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good
Writing acrostic is fun. I am trying to do it too. Great job.
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Nice Comment
Thank you for stopping by and reading. I appreciate your comment. Take care, Sandy
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