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Mist

mist flows
through summer haze
bringing promise of change;
clouding the air with flames and – scent
of smoke

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  • masterblaster gold member
    March 4, 2007

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    Hi, made me think of a forest fire, we have o many here in the summer months and most are set by man I am afraid, nice write, all the best in the comp,Di


  • wattle silver member
    February 24, 2007
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    Yes I like this - I call them death poems (simply soul that I am) --- Thank you.